In this report, I learnt the significance of text flow. The text must be FLOW!!! To achieve this, idea link logically was the first important thing to bearing in mind. Secondly, body paragraphs should have a clear theme for each and some examples to support ideas, and moreover, linking words are indispensable. Thirdly, there should have some connection between each paragraph, which guides reader what will be the next. Topic sentence for each paragraph should point out the big theme for this paragraph. At the same time, there are many small themes for each sentence, and therefore the structure of each sentence should have a theme at the beginning of the sentence then follow by another theme, which then become the first theme for the next sentence. Furthermore, formal writing means more nominalisation, thus change verbs to nouns are necessary sometimes, as well as use abstract nouns to make communicating complex idea. For example, I used feminism to express women’s desire for equality. Besides, to make the report more interesting and convictive, use pictures or graph is a good tool. Lastly, don’t forget to put in-text referencing in the text and bibliography at the end.